There's a story below, it was a commision for a friend that likes the stories i write, i liked the story, so i decided to make this drawing, besides it has many flaws i really liked the result, but i think that it could be amazing, i still need much practice.

Pencil line work, photoshop coloring.

now the story, it's long, judging by the pageviews i got and the views that my drawings get, nobody will read all the story, anyways, here it is. If you don't liked rememter:
This was NOT writen for you hahahhahahha XD

sorry for my poor skills in english T_T


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Millions of years ago, in a very strange place, a girl was born; she looked funny and had very funny eyes. As usual in that place, after a few months from the born, the girl was took to see the oracle, so she could tell the future of the girl, it was also usual that the oracle smoked odd weed, only the oracle had access to such stuff, so, the oracle went nuts and spoke incoherences, everyone in there thought she was in a trance, so close to the gods. The interpreter of the oracle said:

-This girl will be capable of great acts-
After a little pause, continued with strong and dire voice
- For good... or EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11111111111 HAAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHHAHAA-

The parents of the girl were really worried about the prediction; the interpreter took the big fat fare for the service and asked them to leave. One night, the father was really drunk and told about the prophecies to his friends that were even more drunk than him, they were scared and suggested to him to drop the girl into the forest to avoid any harm, he "thought" it wasn't a bad idea, then he went to the forest and there he left the girl.

It won’t be told on this story what happened to that guy, but was bad stuff.

Once in the forest, the girl cried for a long time, but then, she was found by a tigress who loved the taste of human flesh, but the girl was too small, so the tigress decided to keep the girl until she was grown and tasty.

After some years, the tigress loved the girl as if she were her true daughter, she loved her joy, her warm feelings, her beauty and funny eyes, she couldn’t manage to make grow her to a suitable size in order to eat, but the girl was a nice, well mannered young lady.

After some more years, the girl became a teenager, sometimes her attitude made the tigress get mad, the situation became thought, so, the big cat decided that it was about time to get rid of the girl, and called to her horse friend so he could give advice about what to do with this human.

Horse had a solution: to marry the girl!!!!1111, after all, she was in the age when humans used to do so, tigress agreed with horse, so she gathered food, water and supplies for a long travel, also, a pretty red dress, all this items came with some human preys that fell upon the hunger of tigress, after all, having a human as adoptive daughter couldn't stop her taste for human flesh, but the girl never noticed this.

The girl looked beautiful, the dress was perfect for her and she looked so good that tigress desired to eat her, but then, horse arrived, carrying every stuff needed for traveling, girl asked what was going on, but tigress just licked her face and said “good bye”.

Horse took the girl to a lonely tree outside the forest, and laid under it, girl did the same, horse told the girl to wait, they waited and waited, waited for about 3 hours, girl complained for those 3 hours, but it seemed that horse did not listen to her.

Then a nut fell from the tree, the horse rose and told to the girl to follow him, surprised, she did as he said, then they walked in direction where the nut fell (following the line between the position of the nut on the ground to the closest point of the trunk).

They walked and walked for a couple of days side to side, and then they arrived to a little town, everything looked beautiful, the grass was very green, the sky looked very blue, the houses were pretty, and girl thought that the guys that lived there were really handsome, horse planned to stay there a while.

They stayed 2 weeks, the guys there seemed to be always busy, at least, that was what girl thought, because nobody cared much about her, even if she tried to get close to them, or maybe they just preferred the girls from that same place, they were very different form her, then horse got bored from all that, and he told to the girl that it was time to return to the forest.

After 2 days of travel, they returned to the lonely tree, girl wanted to go back to see tigress, but horse knew it was dangerous he told tigress didn’t wanted to see them until girl was married, or she would eat them, so they rested under the tree until another nut fell, then they resumed their quest.

Walk, walk and walk, after 3 days of walking they arrived to another town, this one didn’t looked as good as the previous one, even the guys, but people there seemed to be nicer, that was the impression of the girl.

This time, it seemed that girl was very attractive for guys there and also was a guy that she liked a lot, that guy offered her a place to stay at the inn and a nice field that belonged to his family for horse.

Two weeks passed, girl was captivated with that guy, was the first time she was really attracted to someone, the first time she felt so good.

But that guy treated her bad, practically he used her as a servant, he insulted her, yelled and laughed at her, when she wept he became furious, but still, she was fascinated with this guy.

Horse received a very nice treat, and really happy, so much that he didn’t noticed what happened with girl.

One day, guy got so mad with girl that he slapped her, but horse was around, seeing that, horse pulled girl into his own back and ran out from that town.

Girl was dying of sadness; she thought she made the guy act in that way, she felt so guilty, horse told her that the guy was the only responsible of his own acts, but girl don’t wanted to believe that.

Horse didn’t know what to do, was so sad for seeing girl so depressed, so, when they returned to the forest, he took her with tigress, they told her what happened and girl stayed with her mom for some time, but it seemed that nothing could make girl feel better.

By that time, tigress had 3 cubs, and had to take care of them, she couldn’t stop her life, the hunt had been poor lately and she could barely fed her cubs, so, after a month, tigress called horse, and told him that he must take again girl, so she could find someone else and forget the past.

Again, they were under the tree, waiting, girl was still depressed, when a nut fell into the ground, horse made her mount his back, and they continued the travel to the designed way.

Trip lasted for a week, during that, girl did nothing but complain for her luck.

This time, they found a horrible town, plants were dry, trees were dead, sky looked grey, water looked dark and people were sad, this set made the girl feel even worse. Horse wanted to stay a few days, perhaps there should be something beyond this first impression.

B horse was wrong, , everything was like in first town, then, after the third day, they went back.

When returning, the girl had infected horse with her sadness, but he won’t let them be defeated, there should be something in the world that could make her smile again. They waited, under the tree, a nut fell, and the trip started again.

This time, the trip lasted a month, they arrived a town that was neither pretty nor ugly, again, people seemed to be nice, but girl was distrustful.

They stayed for a couple of weeks, and girl had decided to leave, but then she met another guy, she liked him much and started to spend time with him.

This guy was weird, sometimes he acted as he liked the girl and was nice, when this, she was really happy, but most of the times he was cruel.

And so, time passed, almost a year later, horse was sick of the place, he told to the girl that all will end up in a really bad way, that guy don’t wanted a proper relationship, he just wanted to make fun from her, but girl don’t wanted to leave, she had great illusions, and hoped that he would ask her to have a relationship, horse and girl had the same discussion every day, but nothing happened.

One day, the girl was serving the guy, she always did whatever he asked, on late days, something seemed to entertain much to the guy, girl liked that, because she could see him smile a lot, then, guy gave her a sealed letter and told her that she should give it to his friend ‘Blah’ that lived in the border of the town. Glad of helping him, girl accepted and ran immediately in order to deliver the letter.
Once she was at the border of town, she found an odd looking traveler; he saluted her properly and asked her where and why a girl with such pretty eyes was going so hurry. With the letter on her hand and then showing it to him, she said that was going to deliver the letter, the traveler was so quick and took the letter before girl could react, broke the seal, opened it, took up the letter and watched it for a couple of seconds, then handed it to the girl and asked her to read it.

After reading the letter, she broke into weeping, dropped the letter and ran back to the town, searching for the horse. In letter, guy said that Blah was wrong, that girl was really dumb, she would do whatever he wanted and was so fun seeing her acting that way he could do whatever he wanted with girl, if he wanted. Though he was bored from her dramatic attitudes, he could continue that game a little more, he sent the girl to Blah so he could watch her well, if Blah liked her, maybe guy would give her to him later, after all, they used to play with and exchange girls.

A month later they were again at the lonely tree, girl kept weeping the entire road, she wouldn’t stop weeping soon, they stayed around the place for some days, during which, horse insisted in many ways that they should start to travel again, she needed to see new things, beautiful things, world was full of such stuff, girl accepted so that the horse shut up and don’t bother with that again. So they followed the route signaled by another nut.

3 weeks lasted the trip until they arrived into a little happy town, where happy and kind people lived, but girl was very depressed and don’t wanted to talk to people, they stayed there for a week, some people got sad for seeing her so depressed and wanted to help, but she was distrustful and don’t wanted anybody to “help” her, she isolated herself but horse wanted to stay a more time hoping that something could change. But nothing changed, after a month, girl convinced horse that they should return.

On the road back, the girl didn’t speak at all, everything was silence, when horse wanted to talk, he found no answer; after many tries he ceased his attempt. Again, the lonely tree, another nut, without questions, horse pulled the girl into his own back and followed the signaled route.

This was the longest trip, lasted for 6 weeks, they arrived to a semi-desertic land and the travel was getting tougher, and much tougher because of the horrible attitude of the girl, but horse was decided to help her and he was sure that this was the way to do it.

They found a road on the land and followed it, was much easier than walking on the wilderness, after a while, the road was divided, horse had to decide to go left or right, on right they saw far away a town, there was also a very high and mysterious building, but on left there was a closer town, they were very tired, so they decided that they would better go to the closer place.

On the way, horse found a field with some mares, he told girl that he would join her later on town and went to play with mares.

Girl was furious with horse, she didn’t want to go there she hated everything, but had to go on. Once in town, she thought it was a terrible, ugly and hot place, nothing she could want could be found there. Walking on the streets, when she passed in front of the inn, a tall and fat woman came out from there, carrying a large vase; she stopped to watch the girl and told her that she was a pretty lady, she dreamed about a lady, her dreamed daughter that looked exactly as girl. This was incredible for the girl, but she couldn’t refuse free food and lodging.

Next day, girl went out to walk and explore the town, that fat woman was very strange and she don’t wanted to spend much time with her, after all, she thought to have a black bitter heart, nobody could find anything good there, that woman should be mad. She noticed that great preparation had place, there should be a great festival soon, she didn’t want to be there when that happens, she hated people, it would be even worse seeing happy people. While she was thinking about that, an old man, that seemed to be in charge of preparations, approached to her and spoke to her with all possible familiarity

-Where have you been? I thought that you won’t come, remember that you must bring me the ruby fruits for the cake-

Girl thought that this old man was weird, but everything in that place was so. She accepted and then returned to her room at the inn to sadden for her misfortune.

On the following day girl was walking by the town and found again that weird old man, he reminded her that fruits were vital for the festival, this time girl thought this could be funny and asked him where to find the fruits, but old man replied:

-Where? In the same place you found them past year! In front of the coconut temple-

Immediately, girl thought about the large building that she saw when the road divided, that should be the temple then she decided to go there to find some fruits.

When she was walking by the place where the road divided, she found a guy, he looked familiar, he saluted her properly and asked:

-What do you do here? Where are you going?-

Girl said she was going to the coconut temple, but she didn’t know what she was doing there.

Then the guy asked –why are you going to coconut temple?-

-Because the old man asked me to do so-

-How is that you are here, on such a far land?-

-Because horse brought me here-

-Perhaps what you are searching is not here, nuts are many things but not advisors, you should go back, soon you will find the signal that will tell you what are you searching for-

The guy walked away while girl was thinking about those words. Why was she searching for? She was following horse and horse was following orders, but what was the best for her? What they were searching was what she wanted or needed? When she noticed, the guy was gone. She continued her way to the coconut temple; she didn’t know what to think.

At last, she arrived to the great building, it was really really big, 4 equally sized stone walls, it had neither windows nor doors, no way to get in or out. Weird building, but at its shadow, she saw some plants with shiny red fruits, they shined as if they were precious stones, that should be the ruby fruits! She picked up some of them, but that plants had many thorns that hurt her hands, she put the fruits inside a bag and made her way back.

During the road, she rubbed her hurt hands, retorted and twisted, when finally arrived to the town, she checked the bag and noticed that with all her hand movement she had bruised the fruits and thought that the old man would get angry about that, but that didn’t really matter, she had many other things to think about, so she took the fruits to the old man, he didn’t seemed to mind about the condition of the fruits, he thanked the girl and continued the preparations, girl ran to her room at the inn, she stayed there thinking, thinking until she fell asleep.

Early, on the next morning, she went to search for horse, took him away from the mares and told him that was time to go away. Trip was quiet, silent, but this time wasn’t bad, wasn’t good, she just didn’t say anything, thinking if what she thought that wanted would be really what she wanted or needed, maybe she needed something else, something that passed close or something that never existed, but for sure, she didn’t know what was what she wanted. After all, this thoughts couldn’t make her feel better, she just felt more confused.

At last, one night, they arrived again to the lonely tree, they slept under it. Next morning, horse waited until a nut fell to the ground, he told the girl that was time to travel, but she denied, said that it wasn’t still time to depart, and then they waited until girl decided what to do.

The night came and something unusual happened, a star fell from sky, a falling star of fate and hope. Girl knew that she had to follow the direction signaled by the star, but she waited, after a couple of hours a second falling star appeared, bigger and brighter, it seemed that it fell close, the previous one disappeared in the horizon, she mounted the horse and told him to follow the direction of the second star, while walking, many other stars fell from the sky, this seemed like some kind of cruel joke, but she decided to continue in the direction of the second, they continued that way

They walked and walked…


(this is the end)
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